- About A Girl
- Dragonfly
- Missed
Besides watching these short films, my visual research will also include a scene from the featured film 'Bronson' as I plan to create a scene which is similar to one that is done in the film.
- The clear representation of realism
- The narrative of her life being told through first person narration.
- The use of flashbacks/snippets of her life
- An unexpected twist
I'm looking at these features as I plan to incorporate them into my own short film.
FIRST PERSON NARRATIVE:
The short film doesn't follow the traditional narrative structure involving Todorov's narrative theory and the narrative is told to the audience though a first person narration. I thought that this was a clever technique as it allowed the audience to get a clearer and deeper understanding of the protagonist. As they're hearing it from her point of view, it makes the relationship between her and the audience closer as she tells them, from the start, intimate details of her life - things that she hasn't told to people before. Having this first person narration keeps the story clear and the focus on the protagonist. It also means that it instantly gets the audience's attention because it creates the impression that she's talking directly to the viewer, which means they cannot ignore her even if they want to. Her narration is also the cue for the editing, as it allows the film to edit to a snippet of her life, how she's being perceived and how she interacts with different people in her life.
REPRESENTATION OF REALISM:
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WIDE RANGE OF CAMERA SHOTS/MOVEMENTS/TECHNIQUES:
FLASHBACKS/SNIPPETS OF HER LIFE:
UNEXPECTED TWIST:
- The effect music can have
- Repetion of shots and the impact that it had
- Range of shots and the impact it had
- The representation of realism
- Unexpected twist
THE AFFECT THAT MUSIC CAN HAVE:
In the film there was background music througout the majority of the film. There was mainly a fast paced instrumental piece for the film, almost something that you would expect to hear in a club. This meant that the editing had to go with the beat of the music, so the editing was very quick. This type of music symbolised the character's situation, which had been a fast and complicated one. It also symbolises how the character is feeling. He has all these rushing emotions that have been building up for some time and have now just exploded, which is why he leaves.
REPETITION OF SHOTS:
Throughout the film there were shots that were repeated. One shot in particular was a close up of the boy writing in his book and was filmed over his shoulder. The first time that it's shown it creates the sense that the audience are there with him and they are curious as to what's he's writing. How is it linked to the film? It also reinforces the point that this the only way that he finds solitude.
RANGE OF SHOTS AND THE IMPACT THAT IT HAD:
The director used a wide range of shots throughout the enire film. Such as when he was running away and is seen running in the parking lot. The camera remains still and waits for him to come towards the camera, which means that there is a wide range of shots. The camera goes from an extreme long shot, a mid long shot, a long shot and ends with a mid shot in this sequence. This creates the impact that he was running away from something meant and running to the camera to find some sort of safety. A safety which he might have not had beforehand.
Another interesting sequence was when he was shown in his home and clearly waiting for someone. You felt sympathetic towards him, as he's all alone and is just waiting by the window. The long shot and the extreme long shots become establising shots. When the camera goes to a mid close up and the audience only see the side of his face, it creates the impression that the audience is there waiting with him. They're comforting him, but he doesn't realise it. When it goes to the extreme long shot of his eye, it's like the window to his soul. Showing the audience that he's all alone, but is so used to it that he has given up reacting to it, as it's the norm for him.
REPRESENTATION OF REALISM:
UNEXPECTED TWIST:
- A clear narrative
- Clear characters
- Simple, but effective camera work
- An unexpected twist
- It starts off with the equilibrium - everyone doing their daily routine.
- Disequalibrum - a colleague tells the protagonist the their colleague Emma is dead. Later on the protagonist sees Emma and it turns out that she isn't dead. They talk about the situation
- Equilibrium - the protagonist has learnt to appreciate what those around him do and he appreciates life more.
CLEAR CHARACTERS:
SIMPLE, BUT EFFECTIVE CAMERWORK:
UNEXPECTED TWIST:
The unexpected twist was that Emma wasn't dead. It is never explained to the audience through the script, as to why all her colleagues presumed that she was. Therefore it makes the audience actively involved as they start to guess why they might have been told this. This twist plays on the audience expectations, as when he looks outside the window you think that he's just thinking. The audience wasn't expecting for him to find out she's alive!
BASIS OF THE SCENE:
In this scene the protagonist 'Bronson' is having an argument with himself. What's clever about this scene, is that one side of his face is painted in order for him to become a new character. This new character is his parole officer. Not only did it show who he was having the argument with, but it was also visually exciting for the audience to see as it's quite extreme and is a shock at first.
THE MUSIC:
There were two different types of music, which went with each of the two characters. When Bronson was playing himself there was a dark, eerie piece of music which suited the character's personality. Whereas, when he was playing his parole officer there was sweet music that you'd expect to hear on a mobile hanging above a baby's cot. However this music covered up the dark undertones in the parole officer dialogue. Also having the sound effects of a theatre audience clapping and cheering at the beginning and end made it feel like the audience was part of this scene too.
THE SCRIPT:
The script was extremely successful at getting across the points of the scene, even though it was a short one. It was clear that there was an argument going on with two different people and it set out who had more power in the scene. As the script was strong and direct, it meant that the actor could give a performance that matched it. The script helped with the progression of the plot as the audience was told more information about what was going to happen to Bronson.
CAMERA WORK:
The camerawork was extremely simple throughout the entire film. It started off as a long shot allowing the audience to see where he was walking to. When he starts off facing sideway the camera still remains at this long shot - creating a distance between the audience and the stage like it is in the theatre. As soon as he starts the conflicted argument the camera is a mid shot and stays this way for the rest of the scene.
MISE-EN-SCENE:
The mise-en-scene and lighting are both kept very simple. It's a stage, which reinforces the idea that this is a show in his mind to the audience. Therefore it should be treated as if it's a show and you're really seeing it at the theatre. To make sure he's definitely the focus of the scene, the only lighting is a bright spotlight in centre stage. This spotlight also reinforces the sense that the audience is seeing a show. To carry on this theme, at the end after he turns around and bows ending with a blackout.
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